Fix grammar (thanks to my wife for proof reading)

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/docs/busybox.net/index.html b/docs/busybox.net/index.html
index 2a63801..d018928 100644
--- a/docs/busybox.net/index.html
+++ b/docs/busybox.net/index.html
@@ -85,22 +85,24 @@ To subscribe, go and visit <a href="http://busybox.net/mailman/listinfo/busybox"
     able to purchase busybox.net (which is where you are probably
     reading this).  Right now, busybox.net and uclibc.org are both
     living on my home system (at the end of my DSL line).   I
-    appologize for the abrupt move off of busybox.line.com.
+    apologize for the abrupt move off of busybox.lineo.com.
     Unfortunately, I no longer have the access needed to keep that
     system updated (for example, you might notice the daily snapshots
     there stopped some time ago).
     
-    <p> My DSL line (where busybox.net is living) is currently
-    struggling a bit under the load.  To address this, I'm making
-    arrangements to get busybox.net co-located directly at an ISP
+    <p> 
+    My DSL line (where busybox.net is living) is currently
+    struggling a bit under the load.  To address this, I'm trying to
+    make arrangements to get busybox.net co-located directly at an ISP
     belonging to a friend of mine.  
     <a href="http://www.codepoet.org/~markw">Mark Whitley</a> (author 
     of busybox sed, cut, and grep) has donated his <a
     href="http://www.netwinder.org/">NetWinder</a> computer 
     for hosting busybox.net and uclibc.org on.   Once the system is 
-    co-located, that should should completely eliminate the current 
+    co-located, that should completely eliminate the current 
     speed problems.  Hopefully, too, we can get some mirror sites set 
-    up soon, to help distribute to load a bit.
+    up soon, to help distribute to load a bit.  Of course, all plans 
+    are subject to change (i.e. if it costs way too much, for example).
 
     <p>
     <!-- Begin PayPal Logo -->
@@ -117,14 +119,14 @@ To subscribe, go and visit <a href="http://busybox.net/mailman/listinfo/busybox"
     </center>
     <!-- End PayPal Logo -->
 
-    Since some people expressed concern over busybox donations.  Let me
+    Since some people expressed concern over busybox donations, let me
     assure you that no one is getting rich here.  All busybox and
     uclibc donations will be spent paying for bandwidth, and paying for
     needed hardware upgrades (Mark's NetWinder currently has just 64Meg
     of memory -- I'm going to be ordering 256Megs of ram and a larger
     hard drive for the box today).   As demonstrated when google
-    spidered the site the other day, the extra ram should really
-    help...  So far, donations received have been sufficient to cover
+    spidered the site the other day, 64 Megs in not enough...
+    So far, donations received have been sufficient to cover
     almost all expenses.  A <b>HUGE thank-you</b> goes out to everyone
     that has contributed!   Right now, I have enough to keep
     busybox.net running for the time being.  I'll keep you posted if